That poem sucked... but actually though.
Not just saying it because of the description, but the wording was just too blunt, it was saying facts that we already know in an edgy way, there is great value in subtlety, and this poem has none of it. Probably sounds better in Japanese or whatever language it was in first.
Besides the value of the actual poem, this looks like a crappy edit of the audio and a bunch of still images to create "effect." It didn't.
Edit: Just watched all of Evangelion to get some context, worth it. Still this is shit, and is done much better in the anime. This isn't really a "poem," but rather a chain of existential thoughts that gets even more significantly stated later.